Jamie Lynn's Night Crawlers
I think the line "reveals too much of his angel haired spaghetti arms" is awesome imagery. It is defeinatly not something you hear. I think the first line "as black as shadow lurking" is a little cliche. But most of the imagery is very interesting. Specially at the end where it talks abou Freddy moving off of Elm Street. I think that could be expanded a little bit.
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