Surangi's short story
I found this story very interesting. I think the beginning is a little cliche with the singing birds and blossoming flowers. Maybe try some different images or comparisons. The way the memories are described are very effective. The tone works very well. I definatley would like to see more. Makes me wonder what happened to her that upset her? Is it an illness, or death in the family, heartbreak, or pregnancy? This story could many different directions and I would love to see where it ends up.
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