Josh's Addict
First person works really well for this story. It would have the same depth if it was written in third person. Its worded to follow the train of thought and addict would have and that helps the story to flow. I think the story flows very well. The brevity of the story works well with the first person narration. It doesn't drag on or omit too many details. It's short and to the point. It makes the reader wonder what happens next. Does he ever overcome the drug addiction? Maybe write a second part or a series that are like journal entries. Or maybe he's looking back on the past and he is now no longer an addict. He could have a good job and family, but is reflecting on how is life used to be. Or it could be a journal entry that's part of a larger story-maybe his wife or child found the journal and is reading it?
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