Tuesday, April 5, 2011
Classmate Response Week 10
Yeeva Cheng's Random Impulse 1 of Week 10 First of all what grabbed my attention was the name Calliope. It is so unique and refreshing. Some names have become so cliche that it is really good to use a new and unique name. The "so unpredictably predictable weather" is an eye-catching phrase. It describes Georgia perfectly. It's a very unpredictable story which is good. Every detailed flowed to the next and the story had an amazing rhythm to it. the only section I didn't understand was "she had been mourning all her life." It's hard to understand why if he's only been dead a year, she's been mourning all her life? Maybe I just missed something or didn't understand. The drama in the story is very subtle which works well in a short story. It was a really good story.
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